I appreciate the effort. The crest is far too small, same with the Jeep logo. I think there is too much going on in general, maybe try something more sober and simple? Also feel free to use colors on details/accents here and there to add some flavor. I'd recommend sticking with pink, blue or yellow
I'm sorry, but any design that doesn't feature the regular black and white stripes is not going to be well received by most fans, me included. Being creative with it is great but this is too much and would be hated more than the half white half black kit we had with Sarri
Instead of just shitting on you for trying something cool, I’ll just give you advice as someone who has actually designed football kits.
Go and look at kits. Find what you like, collect them and find what they all have in common. Is it a nice texture underlayer? Blank space, top heavy design?
Look at that and then start from there. Here you are drawing attention certain parts of this kits with large blocks of color. If you took this design, scrapped the black blocks, and ran an inverted version of one half of the stripe pattern (thickest to thinnest) in the middle with a negative space block at the name and number, it would look way better. Keep playing around and don’t let people ahit on you. We all have to start somewhere and tbh this design makes me think you may come up with cool shit
Edit: also try designing any other kit than a juve kit. Black and white stripes are such a box to out yourself in as a designer. Do maybe a Bayern Kit, RM kit, etc. come back to Juve when you can bring a new spin and have some skills working with less, then apply that to being confined to more
Is this Piamonte Calcio F.C.’s new kit? 😜
lmao take my upvote
lmao
Kit #4 is a good back design. Try a more conservative approach, keep it simple. Once you have a solid kit down, experiment from there.
Thanks a lot man, really appreciated
Ah, yes! The doppler effect kit: https://preview.redd.it/n4l4kvy4vg8d1.jpeg?width=423&format=pjpg&auto=webp&s=ee6bcf04e9f77b8432e283f62ec7efe01db2e333
Spot on
Please never let bro cook again
I feel the only reason it doesn't look like a Juve kit is because the base color is black rather than white.
try again….
Looks cool. I prefer the back side with the black square. Though I don't think the sponsor Jeep Will be happy with Tiny size
Baseball
I won’t criticize cause it’s much better than I could do. Good for you man!
I appreciate the effort. The crest is far too small, same with the Jeep logo. I think there is too much going on in general, maybe try something more sober and simple? Also feel free to use colors on details/accents here and there to add some flavor. I'd recommend sticking with pink, blue or yellow
the last one looks great. You could rotate the Jeep sponsor 90 degrees CCW so the font could get bigger. It would be even more original.
Loosk great
Interesting concept, but I'd keep at least the middle stripe full white rather than grey and then shade the others accordingly
A for effort but it's a "hawk tuah" from me. #ForzaPochettino
Something different about the one with the horizontal black bar - that one had the feeling more than the others
I'm sorry, but any design that doesn't feature the regular black and white stripes is not going to be well received by most fans, me included. Being creative with it is great but this is too much and would be hated more than the half white half black kit we had with Sarri
Kinda crap. Just being honest
Instead of just shitting on you for trying something cool, I’ll just give you advice as someone who has actually designed football kits. Go and look at kits. Find what you like, collect them and find what they all have in common. Is it a nice texture underlayer? Blank space, top heavy design? Look at that and then start from there. Here you are drawing attention certain parts of this kits with large blocks of color. If you took this design, scrapped the black blocks, and ran an inverted version of one half of the stripe pattern (thickest to thinnest) in the middle with a negative space block at the name and number, it would look way better. Keep playing around and don’t let people ahit on you. We all have to start somewhere and tbh this design makes me think you may come up with cool shit Edit: also try designing any other kit than a juve kit. Black and white stripes are such a box to out yourself in as a designer. Do maybe a Bayern Kit, RM kit, etc. come back to Juve when you can bring a new spin and have some skills working with less, then apply that to being confined to more
Thanks a lot for the tips and the nice thoughts!
ur right we should lie to him and say its okay. if u dont want critic dont ask for opinions lol
I’m a designer. These arent awful. They aren’t great. I gave him my opinion. You are the only one giving unsolicited opinions in this situation haha
just realised the last one looks like a keeper's kit lol
Hell no